Today: a look at some old stuff.
Tomorrow: if I make time, I'll hunt down an assigment to write in the "voice" of someone famous. I'll make you guess who it is, too
I just wrote this thang below:
I no longer want your kisses
but I don't want to lose your mouth.
I no longer want your body
but I miss your embrace.
I don't want to consume you
but to be a part of your spirit,
as you will
Always
be a part of mine.
To make you laugh
would be a blessing.
I miss that look
of consternation
I could create on your face.
I cannot
make you care
any more
or less,
but
I guess
I just hope
I'm not forgotten.
And
I'd like to
see your
eyes.
This thang below was written about two years ago. "Write a love poem," the prof said, and here it goes.
A Love Song in Four Parts
“Forgive me, my beloved, neglected gillyflowers.” – Pablo NerudaNumber One
in eighth grade
your soft-brown curls
my tangled braid
You were old-fashioned
and I loved you dear
But, mostly,
my reflection
Number Two
your eyes weren’t blue
but green, and full of song.
I wanted to
detangle you
unfurl your woes
as your coarse fingers,
from guitar, fretfully strummed,
swept down my cute nose. You
slept peacefully in my presence,
more shallowly
on your own.
Number Three, my lucky one
I’m learning now from you
to be myself to give freely
less jaded, jagged
and wanting.
Your eyes are brown
and you give me everything.
I think more
of you than the
emerald on my main.
Quaint and Selfless
I know what people want of me
like any child
or person unenlightened
and cunning either way
I seem so good but love
myself leaving others
To sleep in my dreams.
Comments (6)
"emerald on my main." ring finger?
Loved the last stanza, all of it really.
I know next week I won't be very busy, I'm taking the week off work to get myself ready for school! Though Jeff is working, he doesn't have much going on in the evenings, so I believe we are pretty free.
Dear Emily,
And I didn't think I knew you wrote poetry. Very nice.
Michael F. Nyiri, poet, philosopher, fool