Wednesday, August 17, 2005

  • Today:  a look at some old stuff.
    Tomorrow: if I make time, I'll hunt down an assigment to write in the "voice" of someone famous.  I'll make you guess who it is, too
     
    I just wrote this thang below:
     
     
    I no longer want your kisses
    but I don't want to lose your mouth.
    I no longer want your body
    but I miss your embrace.
    I don't want to consume you
    but to be a part of your spirit,
    as you will
    Always
    be a part of mine.
     
    To make you laugh
    would be a blessing.
    I miss that look
    of consternation
    I could create on your face.
     
    I cannot
    make you care
    any more
    or less,
    but
    I guess
    I just hope
    I'm not forgotten.
     
    And
    I'd like to
    see your
    eyes. 
     
     
    This thang below was written about two years ago.  "Write a love poem," the prof said, and here it goes.
     
    A Love Song in Four Parts
    “Forgive me, my beloved, neglected gillyflowers.” – Pablo Neruda

    Number One
    in eighth grade
    your soft-brown curls
    my tangled braid
    You were old-fashioned
    and I loved you dear
    But, mostly,
    my reflection

    Number Two
    your eyes weren’t blue
    but green, and full of song.
    I wanted to
    detangle you
    unfurl your woes
    as your coarse fingers,
    from guitar, fretfully strummed,
    swept down my cute nose. You
    slept peacefully in my presence,
    more shallowly
    on your own.

    Number Three, my lucky one
    I’m learning now from you
    to be myself to give freely
    less jaded, jagged
    and wanting.
    Your eyes are brown
    and you give me everything.
    I think more
    of you than the
    emerald on my main.

    Quaint and Selfless
    I know what people want of me
    like any child
    or person unenlightened
    and cunning either way
    I seem so good but love
    myself leaving others
    To sleep in my dreams.

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