Tuesday, August 16, 2005
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Awesome splendor, silver moon
Against a midnight midnight sky
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Who are we we wonderers
To catch the tears Orion cry
It could happen happen soon
Don't let the moment pass you by
Once again, I am stumped. I am just no good at poetry.
RYC: I would probably post my picture as a protected post.
As long as my love is with me
I could stand here until I die
(Oh Dan, quit being so humble! You are not stumped.)
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Raptured in a lunar swoon
Breath caught mid-sigh
holding you once again
has made it impossible to say goodbye
After I get done writing this poem
I am going to read catcher in the rye
Now the sky is blue blue true
With no visible scars
From the nightly
Rendevouz
Deja deja deja vu
The deep deep well where Ishik lie.
Eli, Eli, sipped some dew
While Ishik ate a mooncake pie
His manna manna manner was
To eat it with one small french fry
"Just enjoy the manna manna, man
And quit that junk food," said Eli
From it's beauty I would swoon
Alas, I am too young to die.
Thanks for your comment, I hope you are feeling better too!
hehe...
To think, this creator of awesome might
would care for a failure such as I