Friday, October 28, 2005

  • QUESTIONS OF THE HEART

    Ponderings
    From the wanderings
    Of my mind
    These questions
    Beg for asking
    All the time

    Here is just a sampling
    With a little bit of rhyme:

    Would people do
    What they do
    Ostensibly for God
    If no one ever knew?

    They toss a beggar a crumb or two,
    Thinking that will surely do,
    Then move swiftly on their way
    Their names to cultivate all day.

    Glorious empires they must build,
    Both here and in the sky,
    Ones they think they will inhabit
    In the by and by

    And all the time the echo
    Of self-absorption's sin
    Blows about the darkness
    Howling like the wind.

    But empires safely built now,
    And names so widely known,
    They think themselves
    Secure from guilt
    Upon their lofty thrones.

    And through their lifelong effort
    The seeds that they have sown
    Are tares of bitter darkness
    That now they too must own


Comments (13)

  • djsmallz18

    This is remarkable...I love the imagery of sitting in their self-absorbed empires while the winds of their sin howl in the darkness...the final stanza is astute, poetic (artfully so), and chilling...Good work!! There's a line in the Dallas Willard book, "Divine Conspiracy" which comes to mind about religously ostentatious sin..I don't have the book right here...I'll get it later; leaving to go shopping now.

    ryc...LOL! Guilty, I guess, convicted by my own words.

    blessings...Jim

  • secureintruth
    Breath:  I've had similar questions in my heart.  Any thing in particular that moves your heart to ask such questions?
  • Breath_Of_Dawn
    Like a sparrow in a tree
    A panoramic view I see

    Like the dust to which
    I'm ground
    I feel the weight
    Of all around.

    Like an eagle
    With no nest
    I soar aloft
    In search of rest.
  • secureintruth
    Breath:  Thanks for the reply.  Is it heaven we long for?  Are we weary of our time away from home and in need of refreshment?  I'm praying, and will pray for you too.  Thanks for your openness. 
  • Breath_Of_Dawn
    Tis not for escape
    I oft so rise
    But that I see
    With open eyes
    The path that I
    And all might take
    If we be
    Truly wise

    For this I soar
    Above the crowd
    The better view
    To see
    That meeting God
    Upon the cloud
    The better me
    I be.

    Tis not for heaven
    We must wait
    For even now we're there
    But heaven waits
    For us to wake
    And bring its light
    To bear.
  • gothabilly

    Just the garbage that others throw down the wells of our lives, mistaking us for outhouses when we're young and can't fight back. No wonder some of us are more comfortable outside the grand palaces others crave.

    This was profound!  Thank you.  Your comments and verses have been more than inspirational.  Thanks for being there.

  • left0verture

    Okay, it's not a masterpiece, and I usually don't like regular meter and rhyme, but I guess there's a lot of dirt to move...

    somewhere between the wealth of kings
    and pious poverty
    from giving all that's mine away
    there is a place for me.

    Somewhere between rejoicing
    in the freedom that is mine
    and mourning for the ones still chained
    a place for me I'll find.

    somewhere between the anger
    toward a vile, abusive man
    and the pity for his broken wife
    there's room for me to stand.

    somewhere between the Heaven
    that I hope to see one day
    and the Hell I so deserve
    is just a glimmer to light my way.

    somewhere less toward watching
    to point out where you sin
    and closer to my stumbling walk
    is where my eyes belong.

  • Nicodemus42
    I'm at a different church now. I passed the sign care into someone else's hands. But we left on very good and loving terms and I can email that to the person doing the signs now.
  • espinosa_baca
    ryc (some time ago): "Do you have any pics of those ruins?"

    Breath of Dawn,

    Well, I guess that depends on which lineage I want to trace. If I look to the Iberian Spanish line, the oldest standing church structure in the U.S. is only a few miles from my family. As far as I know, none of my biological ancestors built the church, but it stands in symbolically as part of my collective heritage.

    Conversely, if I follow my pre-Columbian line, our temples/universities were systematically destroyed during the first wave of Christianization. They exist today as "ruins" that archeologists "study"--but again, it's nearly impossible to confirm that my family are direct descendents of the Mexica or Toltec. Blood quantum identity politics are of no interest to me here, as Mesoamerica stands in symbolically as part of my cultural heritage. History is fascinating, isn't it?
  • luckyfreecoin
    I agree with you - I think they wouldn't, unless they wanted to impress themselves.
  • jimmish
    I have to tell you that I really enjoy the poem you've included above in your comments, and over on Martha(Secureintruth)'s site. I like how you speak to the thought of soaring to have a fuller perspective of our path, and also to the presence of God's kingdom here and now to open, awakened eyes. thanks...Jim
  • espinosa_baca
    ryc:"I'd like to know what you make of Jesus' answer to Nicodemus? Is He saying - don't worry about it for it comes to you like the wind - do you think?... Who can obligate God to provide salvation to them through their good works or even their confession?"

    Breath of Dawn,

    The passage you reference is one of my favorites. Perhaps spiritual rebirth is like a refreshing breeze--though it's "invisible," the experience is concrete, embodied. This wind brings us to a manner of living in which God's will is done on earth as it is in heaven. While we do not and cannot force the wind to refresh us, we certainly are compelled by it to live as Jesus repeatedly and consistently taught us to live. If I remember correctly, Nicodemus was a Sanhedrin ambassador. The Sanhedrin, the most important religious assembly of the time, were Jesus' primary opponents. 2,000 years later, when I look at the most powerful religious assembly of our day, it seems little changes across time. Agree?
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