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Original: 11/21/2003 2:50 AM
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Friday, November 21, 2003

 

There once was a boy, who had everything he wanted
    And he felt so alive,
    Because he knew that he was.
He turned to the girl in the seat beside him
    And she asked him
    "What do you want?"
And he answered, "This".
    Because he knew he had lots,
    But she made him feel loved.

There once was a boy, who had everything he wanted
    And he felt so in love
    Because he knew that he was.
He looked at the girl across the table from him
    And she asked him
    "What are you thinking?"
And he answered, "That I'm in love with you."
    Because he knew that he was,
    And she made him feel whole.

There once was a boy, who had everything he wanted
    And he felt powerful and strong.
    Because he knew that he was.
He looked at the girl beside him in bed,
    And she asked him
    "What's wrong?"
And he answered, "Nothing".
    Because he knew when he was with her,
    She made him feel safe.

There once was a boy, who had everything he wanted
    And he was self-centered and wrong,
    And he knew that he was.
He looked at the letter the girl left on the table,
    And his heart broke in two.
    "Come home" he begged
And she answered with a smile,
    Because she needed to feel love,
    And that's what he had for her.

There once was a boy, who lost everything he loved,
    And the darkness rolled in like the rain,
    and he knew this could be the end.
He looked for the girl, to love once again,
    But she was no where to be found.
    "I love you" he said
But it wasn't enough.
    Because she was so scared,
    And he was the reason.

There once was a boy, who was willing to fight,
    And he was driven by passion
    Because that's what he had.
He dreams of the girl, that he has loved his whole life
    Yet she is still out of his reach.
    "I need my best friend" he said with a tear
And now he waits.
    Because although she is out there,
     He does not want her to go.
He can hear it in her voice,
And see it in her eyes.
    She made him feel more than ever before,
    And his love for her will never die.


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Visit rmforeman's Xanga Site!
I particularly enjoyed this one...a lot...extremely...yeah.
Posted 11/21/2003 8:05 AM by rmforeman - reply

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That took my breath away. Well written.

Posted 11/21/2003 12:48 PM by Jujuinoz - reply

Visit RabidSquirrel's Xanga Site!
I don't comment much, especially on a serious note, but this absolutely deserves it.  Powerful and damn fine writing, Mr. Thompson.
Posted 11/21/2003 2:57 PM by RabidSquirrel - reply

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This one leaves me speechless.
Posted 3/19/2007 3:44 AM by Kallikrates Xanga Lifetime Member - reply


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