Hard On For Candy

Friday, April 18, 2008

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Innocent Erendira: and Other Stories (Perennial Classics)
By Gabriel Garcia Marquez
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I don't know if you realize that we've been living
a sugar coated life. It goes well with your sugar
coated cunt. I feel like Laffy Taffy while you parade around-
cotton candy hair and Hershey Kisses tits- your cartwheels send
pieces flying through the air, be careful.
You could start a riot.

At night we gorge ourselves in caramel lust. I’m
trying to avoid your cherry center but we both know-
it won’t last long. And you, your tongue so
well rehearsed at searching every crevice for any
sweetness left unfound- like those
candy soda bottles, you melt my wax exterior and
quench your thirst on what pours forth.

And I’m falling in love all over again with your gumdrop ass.
There’s toffee in your kiss and syrup
blankets everything we own, but that’s just fine.
Our sugar coated love affair will serve me well-
and if you leave I’ll drive a pixie stick right through
your strawberry heart, and watch your filling spread across the floor.

But you’ll never leave me, will you? You’ve grown
dependant on my face.

You’ve got a sugar coated craving only I can
help to take away and
nothing to offer but a mouthful of rot,
from my sugar coated crotch.

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I love the whole thing! Especially the sugar coated cunt line! This piece reminds me of the line in Sandman when the two rasberry people copulate frantically before melting. This makes me crave candy even though I don't like it! Good job ^__^
- 4/14/2008 7:52 PM
- Tenacious_Psyche (message)
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Gourmet chocolate makes my teeth hurt a little.
. . . Yes I brush them!
- 4/14/2008 9:27 PM
- Legi0nnaire (message)
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Reading this makes me think of the boy I like.
Dirty, dirty thoughts. :X
Hormones make us GO GO GO! Goodness, poo on them.
He really is cute. I'm scared somebody else will realize that and will take him away from me, even though "he was never mine to lose...." Ahh, Les Miserables. I love that musical.
- 4/14/2008 9:57 PM
- novemberwind (message)
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*hugs*

I think they should make pornos themed by your poetry.

It would be AWESOME.

(Also, I miss you.)
- 4/14/2008 11:23 PM
- Astarte_Literati (message)
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@Astarte_Literati - And I miss you too. Which is why you should message me. And why oh why do I love that monster so much?
- 4/14/2008 11:27 PM
- Ma_Malai (message)
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@Ma_Malai - I will do so post-haste.
- 4/14/2008 11:29 PM
- Astarte_Literati (message)
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Fantastic piece!!
- 4/15/2008 11:59 AM
- theladyofabundance (message)
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well that's got something for everyone.
i would say it was "sweet," but that might be a little too much. :)
- 4/15/2008 2:24 PM
- atsixesandsevens (message)
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the image of chocolate melting is a bit sensual isn't it?

i don't play with my colors or textures besides some brigtening. and i am thinking about a book, maybe you'd be interested in creating one for yourself too. http://www.blurb.com
- 4/15/2008 9:13 PM
- heyitzlong (message)
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"At night we gorge ourselves in caramel lust" - that's great.
~S
- 4/18/2008 5:44 AM
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