Tuesday, April 08, 2008
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A DOOR TO DISILLUSION
A labyrinth of confusion and mystification,
A subterrane of complication and consternation
An asylum where all my wishes come and take rest
And then go to find a way in my idolized enchilada.
The electricity of trepidation runs through my veins
Fears pullulate of losing all my precious aspirations.
Why can’t there be genesis of moksha from my desolate womb?
Why can’t the fall of my yearnings in cosmos soar-up to reach horizon?
Time and Time again this fall is persisting, an endless diminution!
Why am I worried of this fall?
I feel a dearth of bottom in this void universe.
An absence of ‘where’ my desire can smash!
Who knows, below down may be heaven is there.
Let my desires be free-spirited to reach out to heaven.
For I know, true freedom gives road to self-reliance.
A blessing of thoughts that can make truly ME!
©Nidhi
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Comments (17)
we fall because we stop flying... we stop soaring into the sky... that is all. it doesn't make us who we are or who will be tomorrow. it just is what we did.
beautiful words....thanks for sharing them
@NightlyDreams - Thanks for stopping-by. Here I just wanted to know if you are falling and you know that there is no base upon which you can hit, will you have a fear of fall?
@ReachOutToHeaven - would i know there was not a bottom to hit? it is really the free fall that makes our stomaches clench so i would probably have that stomache clinch and still be afraid no matter what was said by the falling feeling in my stomache. i think it's biological. god made up the body to have that feeling to know when we are in trouble and to act upon it? maybe?
We fall because we do not believe we can fly. Love these words you are so talented. It is such a pleasure to come here. Thanks for sharing dear heart. Judi
Nidhi, from top to bottom, all is you and you are all.
Fear of falling, whether by gravity or something that you perceive you did or did not, should or should not do, facing any feeling (of falling in this case), and still, still you go on, you go on as if it matters. It does matter, and it is but a small thing to do, this going on, but is it not also our greatest power and joy.
Namaste
I really enjoyed the variety of words you employed to give deeper meaning to the poem.
~Beauttiful Words, Beautiful Pic!!!~You are delightfully talented!!!
Wishing you an especially musical & magical day ahead...(((Angel Hugs & Love...)))
~The Island Concierge~.
Great words...espeically "Why am I worried of this fall?"
you are a good writer keep writing....God bless you....
i can see that you really do listen to your inner voice...thats great...
if you have time do go through this article...
http://www.xanga.com/a_young_loner/540384518/item.html
God bless you...
Take care...
Thanks for the prayers my friend. I know this will resolve itself for everyone's highest good. Judi
Truly beautiful. Right now, I"m in a tizzy. They
want to do a blood transfusion on my husband.
They took him to Tampa. I live in No. Florida.
His family is in Tampa. I know they will take care of
him, but I can't help but worry. I pray he'll be ok.
I have to stay here, cause of my daughter, and the house,
and cats. Don't have anyone here to help me.
Thank you for your post. If it's, ok, I'll subscribe?
I have two blogs under two names, but I'm the same person.
Riding_Hood/Sunsetheart
Am fine...and hows life treating you...
God Bless YOu !
Sometimes ...an aparent fall down is really a fall Upward..and in some cultures..Heaven is 'located' below and hellish conciousness is "located"
above..metaphore can be used to disipate illusion and invite in illumination...blessings Upon Your path. ((Wings))
Sounds like lametations. - void universe
such beautiful thoughts.....