Saturday, March 29, 2008
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Dawn
A soft light touches the skyShe lifts her headStretching toward the warmthThe dew rolls offHer petal soft skinShe throws her arms wide openBlooming in beautyAt last awakeTo greet the new day.
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Comments (6)
That is really nice! It reminds me of Midsummer night's dream.
@storyslut - thank-you!
i agree with storyslut..very dramatic..it's like a very pretty girl woken up by the sunlight from her window..although it's more like the opposite of your "to hell with today" entry :)
xx
@DouseYourselfWithCheapPerfume - To me it is a flower greating the morning!
but i'm close right? haha! well, i thought that "petal soft skin" was a metaphor, to avoid using the old "porcelain soft skin" bit..heh. but it's great, nonetheless. :)
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@DouseYourselfWithCheapPerfume - close yes...lol