Saturday, April 05, 2008
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WWC#2
Weekly Writing Challenge Here is the second challenge.
Challenge 2 :
You come home and listen to your phone messages. You freeze on the third message. Write about it.
It's dark and very late. Suddenly I sit up in bed. I am not sure what awakened me but I am wide awake now. I notice the light on my phone blinking. I snatch up the phone in a panic and wonder why I did not hear it ring. I call and listen to my messages. The first was just a series of beeps. A call from outer space I guess. Or a fax machine trying to phone home? The second was from my mom. The third started out strangely."Ms. C," A voice I don't recognize said to me,"I am sorry but............"The connection became fuzzy and faded out. My heart stops. My eyes flick to the clock and to the empty bed beside me. It is 4 am and my husband is not home from work yet. Panicked I search the caller ID, Unkown stares out at me. I started to dial his number and the phone rings in my hand. I drop the phone with a shreik. I am afraid to answer. I am afraid to learn a wifes worst fear. "Ms. C?"
"Yes?"
" I am sorry but there has been an accident"
The rest of the words fade from my brain. I know its come true. I can feel it even though the stranger wont say much more than Mr C. is at the hospital.
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Comments (14)
Ohhhh I WANT MORE!
Will you write about the next chapter another time?
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@sarahsD - Glad you liked it! not sure about that...it kinds goes along with the first WWC a prolog....
@mommo5 - thank-you! I was inspired and it worked.
Wow......well done! Heart pounding til the end.....
@brokenbindings2 - thank-you!
ooh good stuff!
@foreveralwaysends -
This is every woman's worst nightmare! Very well written, you captured the moment exactly as I imagine it would be.
@ElidabitAimStuffin - THank-you...we were close to that not long ago but hubby called. BY the GRACE of someone he survived!
Excellent entry! So much emotion in so few words! Thanks for participating! And I like the continuation theme.
@weekly_writers_challenge - Thank-you! I may attempt a full story with it sometime....
Being an ER doc, this one kinda hits close to home. I unfortunately get to be the person seeing the guy in question so it hurts to think about the people at the other end of the line. Usually, I get to give news like this in person... worst part of the job by far. Great emotion in the entry! Good passion.
-slicy
@slicy - Thanks. I don't know the exactness of how it would be, but close. My hubby recently slammed his van into the back of a semi going 60. He walked out of it with some minor injuries and he was the one to call me. Yet when I saw the van...I know an angel was with him that day.