Monday, April 21, 2008
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WWC4
Weekly Wiriters Challenge Weekly Writing Challenge:Free write for five minutes, a story, beginning with "He found the cacophony distracting as he walked in the room."
He found the cacophony distracting as he walked into the room. He walked towards the front of the room. He was not expecting the class he was taking to be starting out like this. This was a class on paranormal research. He got closer to the group at the front of the room. They seemed to be gathered around a computer. He leaned to the woman on his left
"what did I miss"
she smiles towards him, " demonstration with pictures of spirits or ghosts if you will."
He frowns for having been late. "Oh? Please explain it to me."
The first ones are much. pictures of orbs. A common phenomenon in the paranormal world. Then came the picture of excitement. At first glance the picture they are looking at looks like a normal store front. But once you brighten and zoom in on the picture you can see a form of a man. It started out looking as if there were a few orbs on the window, or a reflection When the teacher looked closer he found a shadowy form that joined the orbs. The orbs became the arms and legs."
"How amazing that is. I guess that would cause a lot of excitement"
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Comments (9)
Ooooo! I love the photo.
Very interesting topic.
@sarahsD - Thanks, the pic is real...though the rest is not!
I love reading these posts! It's amazing the creativity that stems from the exact same challenge. Great job!
@sarahsD - do you have an interest in the paranormal, or did you write to suit the photo?
@kharahlyn - me too, I agree the diversity is wonderful.
Great job! The story reminds me of the movie, Shutter. I like the added photo, too. It adds to the story. Thanks for participating.
@kharahlyn - I agree...it is very cool to read everyhting, though I haven't the time lately that I want to write and read! Thank-you!
@tater40 - thank-you!
@sarahsD - We have a great interest in the paranormal. I am a sensitive, i guess youwould call it. Sometimes I can see things and sometimes feel them. We did a tour & a hunt in St augustine FL and it was a blast!
@SadnessPart1 - I have never heard that term before!
hehe, I had to look up "
cacophony"on dictionary.com. I REALLY need to expand my vocabulary. I should learn a new word a week, or something. **sheepish grin**
@sarahsD - I don't know if it is a real term but that is what I call it....lol
@Obiesaseru - don't feel bad I had to look it up too...lol