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Posted by: garyfong1 Original: 4/17/2008 7:32 AM Views: 384 Comments: 4 eProps: 6 Read Comments Post a Comment Back to Your Xanga Site

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Thursday, April 17, 2008

	whoooooyah!!!! if you love "Snaps" please write me a review!!
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Since I missed buying the pre-release, I'm looking forward to buying and reading the book when it is released NEXT YEAR.

Posted 4/17/2008 7:43 AM by qnetx - reply

Oh you can get it on the e-store?

Posted 4/17/2008 9:31 AM by garyfong1

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Oh man yeah! I'm with Dixie on the more pictures thing! How cool would it be to have one of those center sections of just pictures like you see in some books!

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Posted 4/18/2008 6:04 AM by Holritz

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I finished reading the book today. A quick read, but rather disappointing. It seems some things, however irrelevant take up a lot of space in the book, whereas others are merely mentioned. I have the pre-release. Yes, tons of typos and ill grammar. However, to be expected on a self-published release.

The book leaves you in suspense. For instance, there is a mention that Melissa is Gary's third wife. He talks a lot about the first one, yet never mentions the second one or who she is...

It seems to jump around, a lot. Very disjointed as another reviewer put it. Unsmooth flow to say the least.

Great ideas and great stories, however needing desperate help of an editor. I found myself correcting the grammar and typos with my red pen until I became so confused at the flow of the story I had to abolish my renderings of such and just continue to read in hopes of something conjoining the interruptions.

Posted 4/27/2008 6:19 PM by pbjphoto - reply

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