Monday, March 24, 2008

  • black road back

    I remember a night
    the July wind blew in something unfriendly
    we passed a black shingle house
    where a senile storekeeper lives
    i was holding you by the waist
    we were both dressed like marlene dietrich
    i wondered where the street would eventually wind
    i wondered why i was on it at all
    and why i was on it with you?

    i remembered one day that senile storekeeper
    was friendly to me
    the wrinkly eye that would normally cringe into a C at me
    warmed up to a recipe i explained
    a grown-up endeavor
    using her store's ingredients
    to cook something for someone i loved
    ingredients made with love
    or the satisfaction of pursuing it

    the street led to a playground
    and we all played at the height of
    Prohibition era getup
    I dangled from a chain net
    suspended like a hooked fish
    and looked down at the wood shavings on the ground
    twirling like a thatched roof watermill
    how it wouldn't break a fall from this height

    the wind told me to get down
    i did.
    i looked for you
    you were thrusting wind on the tire swing
    and i had mud on my black dress slacks
    we'd have to take the same road home
    and now the wind was unfriendly and cold
    i wondered why you wanted to play so much?
    and why we came here together?

    (c) AJD 2008

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  • ADistantStar

    Hey, thanks for the props. Haha you listened to the cast? I didn't know you were the audience we were aiming for. Definitely not a shining achievement as far as editing and quality goes; but in terms of production a great one. First cast in two years? That's a pat on the back in itself.

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